07-09-2013, 06:55 AM
Hi fim, well done on maintaining your thread of thought and keep the spirit of the poem on track.
It was a long read and often I find that i loose interest halfway through. ( I have to confess that i did loose the thread of the argument in the middle but the language you used and the overall flow of the poem was so enjoyable that i just got carried along).
This was def a fun read and i enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
It was a long read and often I find that i loose interest halfway through. ( I have to confess that i did loose the thread of the argument in the middle but the language you used and the overall flow of the poem was so enjoyable that i just got carried along).
This was def a fun read and i enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.