Novice Jive

[Bunx]

EDIT 2
What, You ask is the meaning of jive?
Hog wash, moshing and, staying alive?

What? You ask is the novice jive?
Sexy Jesus, getting all rukus on a herd
of rock and roll chickens? Bak?

What you ask is the meaning of love?
Love is a ruckus Jive, reflecting beauty
from the sky above.

Gals, soaring above the rest. Taking
bread from duck is their sole test.
Camping in the pond, baby geese
like to honk the tonk. The ducks
waddle the butt shaking walk.

Gals squawk in the eyes of the geese, but the
mama geese said, "hey, gal get away, I'm a ducking geese."

Jeeze, the gal thought. Time to swamp the three children
holding grain. Here the children wait for the rain.
Plain and simply running though the softly rippling
puddles I glide though on my bike. Twenty to thirty
my average, eh tike.

Water is for everyone geese,
or not. Seagulls share that water,
before they meet the constant hungry bread stare.
Ducks keep waddling. Geese keep honking.

Well, I'll keep jiving.

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RC i like the edits your have shown above, all where taken with consideration