Dear sir, I think....

[Keith]

Hi TOMH,
I enjoyed reading this. I didn't expect the last stanza; I really like the sort of irony of it.
Not really any crit to offer, other than a small nit. The first two lines felt a bit disconnected, and I wanted to read "an email" or "in an email" or something like that, to bind the lines more together, like they are in the rest of the poem.
JMHO of course.
Best,
LB

Good advice LB thanks very much I will have a go at an edit. Best TOMH