The Plan I & The Plan II

[billy]

Djames,
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the composition. And to everyone else, I obviously know how to rhyme. Have you ever thought of a writing exercise other than writing plain, uninspired rhymes just for the sake of rhyming? Have you ever tried to make a poem flow throughout without rhyming at all? Trust me, it is very challenging! However, I choose to do so occasionally, because it breaks up the monotony of "bullshit poetry." And on another note, the so-called "Poetry experts" who criticize my work may know a great deal about poetry, however, from I have read of their work, they have no idea whatsoever how to write with actual substance ... But then again, different strokes for different folks.

Take care everyone,
Robbie Reaper

stop being silly, if you don't like honest feedback don't post here Admin it's that easy.