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07-08-2013, 11:46 AM

(07-08-2013, 11:18 AM)Bunx Wrote: Thanks Vol(tron defender of the universe)
took your advise there was changed to where. and ucking was deliberate (uck! geese poo)

hopefully the poem reads a bit better

It does read better now Smile

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Novice Jive - by Bunx - 07-08-2013, 03:41 AM

RE: Novice Jive - by Volaticus - 07-08-2013, 09:01 AM

RE: Novice Jive - by Bunx - 07-08-2013, 11:18 AM

RE: Novice Jive - by Volaticus - 07-08-2013, 11:46 AM

RE: Novice Jive - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-08-2013, 02:24 PM

RE: Novice Jive - by Bunx - 07-09-2013, 12:07 AM

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