Novice Jive

[Volaticus]

What? you ask, terribly is the meaning of jive. This line sounds off to me.
Hog wash, moshing and, staying alive?

What? You ask is the novice jive?
Sexy jesus, getting all rukus on a herd Unless I'm missing something, I think the 'j' in 'jesus' should be capitalized.
of rock and roll chickens? Bak?

What you ask is the meaning of love? You haven't got a question mark after 'What' like you have in the above stanzas. Another suggestion could be "What", you ask, "is the meaning of love?"
Love is a rukus Jive, reflecting beauty
from the sky above.

Gals, soaring above the rest. Taking
bread from duck is their sole test.
Camping in the pond filled park, there the baby Should 'there' be 'where'?
geese like to honk the tonk. The ducks
waddle the butt shaking walk.

Gals squawk in the eyes of the geese, but the
mama geese said, "hey, gal get away, I'm a ucking geese." Did you mean to write 'ucking'?

Jeeze! the gal thought time to swamp the three children Difficult to read, because of lack of proper punctuation.
holding grain. Here the children wait for the rain.
Plain and simply running though the softly rippling
puddles I glide though on my bike. Twenty to third
my average, eh tike.

Water is for everyone geese or not. Seagulls even Perhaps a comma after 'everyone'?
share that water, before they meet the hungry bread stare.
Ducks keep waddling. Geese keep honking.

Well, ill keep jiving. 'I'll'

Hi Bunx,
I've written a few suggestions. As always, just my humble opinion, to be discarded or used at will.
Best,
LB