07-07-2013, 05:54 PM
Keith as ever I sing the praises of one of your poems (as your number one fan I can do this without risk of the wow lable).
You have nailed the image of our canal networks in the UK. Sad and poignant and a good character assasination of mindless yobs the world over. Very nicely done.
fav line: hoofed tensioned tow ropes and this line: the colour of drowning water is brown, as leanne said is outstanding. It is such a sad reminder of the grungy dangers to children and drunks the world over. AJ
You have nailed the image of our canal networks in the UK. Sad and poignant and a good character assasination of mindless yobs the world over. Very nicely done.
fav line: hoofed tensioned tow ropes and this line: the colour of drowning water is brown, as leanne said is outstanding. It is such a sad reminder of the grungy dangers to children and drunks the world over. AJ