07-07-2013, 08:24 AM
(07-07-2013, 06:38 AM)Leanne Wrote: Please post only one poem per day, especially when you're asking for serious critique. This post has been closed until tomorrow/ admin.whoops sorry, I posted one last night, wasnt sure if it had been a day, and thought it would not let me post if it had been too short a time, my mistake, my apologies.

