Time Heels

[tectak]

Im definitely pretty lesdyxic... I mean dyslexic with the spelling mistakes, lol, I will fix them now, the cliches, on the other hand will have to stay, cest le vie. thanks for the effort and insight.

Then it is au revoir from Serious Crit. How can anyone "seriously crit" a piece locked so tightly with the jigsawed words of a plethora of poetic precursors that there is not a crack or fissure left in which to stick words of your own?
I'm unable.
Best,
tectak

I'll give it a try, but there turns out to be so many cliches that they might be hardwired in, I appreciate the insight, will see what I can do, but in the mean time will probably write a new one on your advice before I take the scalpel or machete to this one.

You are a good egg.Keep writing.
Best,
tectak