07-06-2013, 11:52 PM
(07-06-2013, 04:03 PM)TRLustig Wrote: Im definitely pretty lesdyxic... I mean dyslexic with the spelling mistakes, lol, I will fix them now, the cliches, on the other hand will have to stay, cest le vie. thanks for the effort and insight.Then it is au revoir from Serious Crit. How can anyone "seriously crit" a piece locked so tightly with the jigsawed words of a plethora of poetic precursors that there is not a crack or fissure left in which to stick words of your own?
I'm unable.
Best,
tectak