Itchy Alcohol

[hardon]

I know this feel too, and although metaphors are for jerks I really like this poem too. It's that fine line between addiction and making an actual choice, it's hard to tell the difference sometimes. Shit just happens. I felt this poem was really solid as it takes off strong, keeps a steady pace and ends strong too I wouldn't add or take away anything just refine like Vistaldust said.