Half-way Holiday Blues

[tectak]

great poem, the potency of imagery was magnificent. I felt the diction lost focus or friction between the first and last paragraph, but the first and last were so perfect and grandiose and rich as to be like miraculous birth and magnificent death, book-ending the mundane though no less poignant and powerful life in between.

Thanks TLR,
Due to your self confessed dyslexia, which I can imagine prevents you from noticing spelling errors prior to correcting, I am unsure what lost friction could mean...
Best,
tectak