07-06-2013, 03:47 PM
I enjoyed it. I kind of got lost in the forest of the first bit, perhaps too much jammed into one place for my tastes, even though I love the forest and its panoply of unending wonders, but it was a fitting stage on which to set loose the final paragraph that danced and sang with a terrible fury so damn nicely, the change of pace from wilderness to th ratrace was well done. well done

