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Itchy Alcohol
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07-06-2013, 09:54 AM
As a friend of Bill W, can certainly relate to this poem. I like it naturally. It speaks my language. It's a great metaphor, Bluebird. Each stanza offers a building crescendo. Work with that. Refine it by flavoring it up even more. Look for where you can take a sentence and add a little more imaginative imagery to express the same idea. Nice work!
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Itchy Alcohol - by bluebird - 07-06-2013, 08:45 AM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by Vistaldust - 07-06-2013, 09:54 AM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by hardon - 07-06-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by Malu - 09-22-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by SimikPK - 09-26-2013, 04:48 AM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by makeshift - 09-26-2013, 11:37 AM
RE: Itchy Alcohol - by Versify - 09-29-2013, 10:52 AM
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