07-06-2013, 07:16 AM
You know what, you're right
Stupid introspective poetry always ends up like this, kinda like painting you know what it's supposed to look like then someone else walks by and they're like ''what?'' because I know what I meant to say with this and the ending but no one else does because obviously it's an emotional outlet so only I know the details. I'll see if I can maybe redo that or just scrap the ending
Also, thanks, I like writing tongue-in-cheek because otherwise it's so so easy to end up in cliché country esp when it comes to romantic poetry
Stupid introspective poetry always ends up like this, kinda like painting you know what it's supposed to look like then someone else walks by and they're like ''what?'' because I know what I meant to say with this and the ending but no one else does because obviously it's an emotional outlet so only I know the details. I'll see if I can maybe redo that or just scrap the ending
Also, thanks, I like writing tongue-in-cheek because otherwise it's so so easy to end up in cliché country esp when it comes to romantic poetry
love is for assholes