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A Passing
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07-05-2013, 10:00 PM
Hi Billy, would love to find one nit with this but coming up empty handed. It is without fault for me. I smell the scent of the forest, the birch and oak, so beautifully expressed. I must weave through the dialect, eg; brae, here we might say hillside, sewage rather than sewerage. A learning experience. Your use of simile and metaphor perfect; awesome writing.
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RE: A Passing - by Heartafire - 07-05-2013, 10:00 PM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-06-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-06-2013, 09:20 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-06-2013, 04:12 PM
RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-06-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-06-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: A Passing - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-06-2013, 03:25 AM
RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-06-2013, 05:21 AM
RE: A Passing - by Leanne - 07-06-2013, 06:49 AM
RE: A Passing - by TRLustig - 07-06-2013, 03:47 PM
RE: A Passing - by Leanne - 07-06-2013, 07:06 PM
RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-06-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-07-2013, 12:18 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-17-2013, 06:18 PM
RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-17-2013, 07:34 PM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-18-2013, 07:38 AM
RE: A Passing - by Brownlie - 07-17-2013, 10:01 PM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 11:09 AM
RE: A Passing - by tectak - 07-18-2013, 08:11 PM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-18-2013, 08:49 PM
RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-19-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-19-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: A Passing - by milo - 07-20-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-29-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: A Passing - by heslopian - 07-29-2013, 10:43 PM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 07-30-2013, 07:37 AM
RE: A Passing - by serge gurkski - 08-02-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 08-02-2013, 09:58 AM
RE: A Passing - by ray - 08-03-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: A Passing - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:21 PM
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