07-05-2013, 10:00 PM
Hi Billy, would love to find one nit with this but coming up empty handed. It is without fault for me. I smell the scent of the forest, the birch and oak, so beautifully expressed. I must weave through the dialect, eg; brae, here we might say hillside, sewage rather than sewerage. A learning experience. Your use of simile and metaphor perfect; awesome writing.
My Best,
Heart
My Best,
Heart

