Opening Up to What Once Was a Scary World
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Hello FIM,

Yes! ;-) Totally get the message.
Stylewise I have no nits.
Only one thing:

conveyed to you by me who loves Swiss cheese
and in defense of Gruyere:
Not every Swiss cheese is from Emmental. ;-)

I find this a witty poem and enjoyed the read.

cheers
serge
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RE: Opening Up to What Once Was a Scary World - by serge gurkski - 07-04-2013, 07:22 PM



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