My mothers death (edit 1 )
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Brownlie, milo thank for the critique and advice. I just removed "liken". Swan dive or Mary, thank you for the extensive critique. It is well received and I made some changes using some points you made. Sincerely appreciate the feedback.
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My mothers death (edit 1 ) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-21-2013, 06:47 PM
RE: My mothers death - by swan~dive - 06-28-2013, 08:20 PM
RE: My mothers death - by swan~dive - 06-29-2013, 05:27 PM
RE: My mothers death - by milo - 06-29-2013, 05:39 PM
RE: My mothers death - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 08:37 AM
RE: My mothers death (edit 1 ) - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-03-2013, 01:45 PM
RE: My mothers death (edit 1 ) - by Bunx - 07-08-2013, 03:19 AM



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