Limericks
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A limerick about Super man.

A Super superb man that was steel
on film as an idol not real
the story is always
the same in the fray
He goes to go fight and not feel

An alternate version with a slight metrical transgression that may help or hinder the poem

A Super superb man that was steel
on film as an idol that’s not real
the story is always
the same in the fray
He goes to go fight and not feel


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Limericks - by milo - 07-02-2013, 01:59 PM
RE: Limericks - by Leanne - 07-02-2013, 02:51 PM
RE: Limericks - by Brownlie - 07-02-2013, 10:58 PM
RE: Limericks - by Leanne - 07-03-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Limericks - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: Limericks - by rowens - 07-04-2013, 12:48 AM
RE: Limericks - by rowens - 07-04-2013, 01:53 AM
RE: Limericks - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: Limericks - by rowens - 07-04-2013, 07:12 AM
RE: Limericks - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 07:52 AM
RE: Limericks - by rowens - 07-04-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: Limericks - by Brownlie - 07-04-2013, 08:06 AM



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