07-02-2013, 10:11 AM
Hi Heart,
I really enjoy your poem.
My favorite part is the first stanza. I like to read it out loud; there's a kind of 'askew' rhythm to it, which I love, and it fits well in the context.
I noticed that you capitalized "To guide me", and I wondered if that was intentional or just a typo, since the rest of your poem is only in capital letters after full stops?
Lovely poem, thanks for putting it up.
Best,
-LB
I really enjoy your poem.
My favorite part is the first stanza. I like to read it out loud; there's a kind of 'askew' rhythm to it, which I love, and it fits well in the context.
I noticed that you capitalized "To guide me", and I wondered if that was intentional or just a typo, since the rest of your poem is only in capital letters after full stops?
Lovely poem, thanks for putting it up.
Best,
-LB