On Warnings.

[allykat727]

warning i don't want to post this.
in an artistist way. but this site, artistist? have a feeling you meant 'artistic'?
meant more than i say. perhaps change this to 'means' to keep your verb tense consistent?

you got words. spit them out,
log them up; then pull them out. Catchy and rhythmic!!

capital mistakes, with warnings you
can be cut off. this is a writing is a Typo? Did you mean 'this writing is a'? ... confused...
privilege, no leverage; no remorse.

so i write this with a feeling, no nonsense.
i write this with a feeling of pretense, address
the warnings, with no mourning this morning. I think the 'mourning' 'morning' play on words is kind of cliche

I like what this piece is trying to say and its good advice Thanks for the read!