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Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter

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07-01-2013, 02:33 PM

I counted a 3:1 ratio of active to passive here, please demonstrate where you see this as overwhelming passive voice

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Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 06:11 AM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by rowens - 06-30-2013, 06:44 AM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 07:16 AM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by rowens - 06-30-2013, 07:20 AM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by tectak - 06-30-2013, 07:11 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 02:35 AM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 07-01-2013, 01:11 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 01:44 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 07-01-2013, 02:05 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 02:33 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 07-01-2013, 02:57 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-01-2013, 04:56 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 07-01-2013, 10:59 PM

RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Heartafire - 07-01-2013, 11:11 PM

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