Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter

[milo]

Thank you both for your comments I will ponder them. I've read some of War and Peace and I would probably have to read some analysis with Ulysses if I wanted to understand what Joyce was getting at. As far as the passive voice I was going for a sort of Robert Frost like ramble, but Milo makes some decent points. Thanks for the comments guys.

Please show me a poem of Frost's where he favors passive voice over active voice?

You do know what passive voice is in writing, don't you?