when should i ever post on serious crit
#3
Milo wrote:
"Warning, we rarely give the warm and fuzzies in serious, "

that is not completely true. Milo is a very mean bastard besides being a brilliant poet ;-) and Tom tectack is not much better: Oh novice, oh neophye so just that you know ;

if

you are female and can smile like
Isabelle Adjani

you can build fortresses of feline so fine

upon my shoulders

(this just for the 2 guys the young lions: lol Milo and TomSmile

Has not Leanne nailed it that Tom's latest poem
already

IS OK as it is.

sigh





Not!

Bunxman: if it was nt you id say: fuck off and get a life.
you could perhaps .. paint or work with
clay? Nice pastimes
for old anarchists like us

but better would be:
you just post your shit.

cheers

serge
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when should i ever post on serious crit - by Bunx - 07-01-2013, 12:24 AM
RE: when should i ever post on serious crit - by serge gurkski - 07-01-2013, 03:49 AM



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