Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al

[serge gurkski]

Serge, stop drinking now.

Tom, symphony is nice (especially as a proper noun)... it might be just me, but I think the rhythm is better as just "to Symphony's allure".

Yes.YES!

(haha to tom's reaction: yes that is beautiful: symphony's allure)

Leanne it would make little sense I stopped driniking before I stumble into the next lonely woman. So:be patient and just grin when you read me. )

Back to the poem and this to the poet;

Please leave the poem as is.
You yourself gave me the same advice. (recall my rabbit poem?)
Yes, of course you can better any poem.
But Tom.
qualified people like this your poem.
so let just go.


cheers my friend

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I'd probably leave it alone now if I were you

It really is lovely.

yes, exactly! My thoughts.