06-30-2013, 11:19 AM
Thanks for all the replies everyone. Sorry if I was being impolite by posting a poem without first giving feedback. I didn't mean to be disrespectful.
As far as the poem itself. What I was trying to convey was that I used did things a certain way (1,2) and then something came along which, in a way, changed me(3). Obviously I didn't do a good job conveying that. But thank you far all the feedback, I'll keep it in mind and hopefully improve.
As far as the poem itself. What I was trying to convey was that I used did things a certain way (1,2) and then something came along which, in a way, changed me(3). Obviously I didn't do a good job conveying that. But thank you far all the feedback, I'll keep it in mind and hopefully improve.