Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al
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Now that I think about it, cutting that line entirely would do no damage to the poem and would enhance the sonics... provided the harsher palatal and dentals of the previous line are dealt with Smile
It could be worse
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RE: Play the violin again - by svanhoeven - 06-20-2013, 10:04 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-20-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 01:15 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-22-2013, 05:09 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 06:26 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 01:59 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-22-2013, 03:59 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by billy - 06-22-2013, 05:12 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-23-2013, 08:24 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-23-2013, 12:04 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-23-2013, 05:11 PM
RE: Play the violin again - by Brownlie - 06-24-2013, 12:36 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 05:03 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 05:12 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 06:17 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 06:28 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by Keith - 06-24-2013, 07:43 AM
RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-25-2013, 11:41 AM
RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 07:48 AM



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