Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter
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I have a feeling I'm really going to get it with this one Hysterical Not sure if herbaceous works here.

Road-Kill

When I am driving rural roads, the dust
Will cloud around windows, as gravel creaks
Beneath, the wheels that hold a heavy force.
Herbaceous eating quadrupeds will die.
When driving long enough, a man will come
Across a wealth of dead and flatly laid
Road-Kill. It’s spring, and roads are rife
With fragile rabbits symbolizing life.
The brake-pads of my car are wearing out
From halting stops, but even brakes don’t cease
Inevitable death. The cracking spines
That signal unexpected ends on roads.
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Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 06:11 AM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by rowens - 06-30-2013, 06:44 AM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by rowens - 06-30-2013, 07:20 AM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by tectak - 06-30-2013, 07:11 PM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 01:44 PM
RE: Rewrite of Road Kill Much Shorter - by milo - 07-01-2013, 02:33 PM



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