06-29-2013, 05:32 PM
if your a novice to poetry, its not a bad start, yet the poem seems pointless.
i dont know if you're trying to tell something and just did it poorly or its your compilation of words.
behind every poem there is an idea and meaning even one of the shortest poems has a lot of meaning, its muhamnad ali's "me, we".
but don't worry you can always get better and learn from mistakes
i dont know if you're trying to tell something and just did it poorly or its your compilation of words.
behind every poem there is an idea and meaning even one of the shortest poems has a lot of meaning, its muhamnad ali's "me, we".
but don't worry you can always get better and learn from mistakes