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Baked Fish Sticks
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06-29-2013, 07:24 AM
This piece was quite unique. At first, I thought... 'really? a poem about fish sticks?' But I read on and loved it. The last few lines are very powerful. In an attempt to give some criticism, I might suggest replacing 'gross' in the final stanza with a synonym since you use gross in the 3rd stanza. Thanks for the read
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Baked Fish Sticks - by bluebird - 06-26-2013, 08:42 AM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by billy - 06-26-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by jblue1622 - 06-27-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by allykat727 - 06-29-2013, 07:24 AM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by moose - 06-29-2013, 08:58 PM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by Bunx - 06-30-2013, 11:39 PM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by Vistaldust - 07-01-2013, 05:10 AM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by newsclippings - 07-01-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Baked Fish Sticks - by bluebird - 07-06-2013, 08:04 AM
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