contaminating

[Keith]

I pissed in the bathwater, great topic I'm in...well so to speak.
lay back and opened up the bladder valve. this and L4 are too mechanical that muscle push ahhhh moment is more organic and of the body, hope i'm making sense.
It's a great feeling unleashing;
the gush of a full tank,
but there was no profundity.
I've pissed in cold swimming pools
there was purpose, a sense of achievement I like the contrast to no profundity
a young lad astride his stallion. nice image

"look at me pissing, yes pissing" language matches the image rely well
In your swimming pool. 'your' make this personal not sure why ? surely it would have been a municipal so 'the'
Warm piss cupping cold balls like matron
on scabies inspection in the kids home.
Turned out she liked inspecting balls
as much as I like pool pissing nice intro to matron we have her card now

I learned that piss in bathwater doesn't make soap
lather yellowed or smelly, pissy smelly,
not fragrant smelly like matron is when you rest
your hands on her stout shoulders
and cough as she says this brings back memories drop and cough
"cough,"

and sighs. there she is again nice

I remember the ammoniac smell of piss
stained sheets piled on bare floorboards,
a mountain of light brown and crisp white.
A mountain of piss. I like the shift in mood and the place you take us it makes things feel more real less fun

very much enjoyed this one well balance light and dark only a couple of nits for me. Best TOMH