Before dusk

[Keith]

I recall the high sea as the color of Lapis lazuli stones
There were veins of grasses in different shades of green
The lone tree in a meadow mercilessly growing
through the breezy air

I starred into the sunset, watching the descent

I enjoyed this moment watching the sun setting over the ocean the use colours and how you describe them, bring it to life. I would look at the L4 as it doesn't add much and so could be improved. TOMH