Solitude in Night

[djames1021]

I really dig the personification you use. It kind of suggests the ambiance, or the night, a sense of influence/involvement. The whole thing has a really dark feel to it, which is cool because it's symbolic to nighttime. I can totally relate to the feelings the person expresses. I get a pretty vivid mental image of the snow, the ground, etc. Takes me straight there.

Also, this part is sweet:
" “colony of parasites” I thought
that is the cynicism nighttime can bring"

I can dig it, my friend. Very well done!