contaminating

[billy]

I pissed in the bathwater,
lay back and relaxed
bladder valve unleashing;
the gush of a full tank.
There was no profundity,
I've pissed in cold swimming pools
with purpose, to gain some sense of achievement
a young lad astride his stallion.

"Look at me pissing, yes pissing!
In your swimming pool."

Warm piss cupping cold balls like matron
on scabies inspection in the kids home.
Turned out she liked inspecting balls
as much as I like pool pissing

I learned that piss in bathwater doesn't make soap
lather yellowed, or smelly,
not fragrant smelly like matron is when you rest
your hands on her stout shoulders
and cough as she says

"cough,"

before sighing.

I remember the ammoniac smell of piss
stained sheets piled on bare floorboards,
a mountain of light brown and crisp white.
A mountain of piss.

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1st edit with the help of all who gave feedback (also capped Look on the advice of AJ)

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original;

contaminating

I pissed in the bathwater,
lay back and opened up the bladder valve.
It's a great feeling unleashing;
the gush of a full tank,
but there was no profundity.
I've pissed in cold swimming pools
there was purpose, a sense of achievement
a young lad astride his stallion.

"look at me pissing, yes pissing"

In your swimming pool.

Warm piss cupping cold balls like matron
on scabies inspection in the kids home.
Turned out she liked inspecting balls
as much as I like pool pissing

I learned that piss in bathwater doesn't make soap
lather yellowed or smelly, pissy smelly,
not fragrant smelly like matron is when you rest
your hands on her stout shoulders
and cough as she says

"cough,"

and sighs.

I remember the ammoniac smell of piss
stained sheets piled on bare floorboards,
a mountain of light brown and crisp white.
A mountain of piss.