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06-26-2013, 05:33 AM
(06-26-2013, 04:44 AM)rowens Wrote: The rhymes are forced in most places, they're forcing the content too much.Thanks for the feedback. To be honest, I wasn't trying to create a refined poem that I would be over the moon with. I was just creating lines that mean something with rhymes, to see if I had any sort of 'skill' that I could build upon. |
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Everything - by Smudge173 - 06-26-2013, 03:58 AM
RE: Everything - by rowens - 06-26-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: Everything - by Smudge173 - 06-26-2013, 04:41 AM
RE: Everything - by rowens - 06-26-2013, 04:44 AM
RE: Everything - by Smudge173 - 06-26-2013, 05:33 AM
RE: Everything - by milo - 06-26-2013, 07:08 AM
RE: Everything - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-26-2013, 11:01 AM
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