One, Two
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Totally agree with what is said above.
Try to create some concrete images - picture starters that the reader can focus on and then travel along a line of thought. (even if that thread of thought might be different to the one you had in mind when you created the poem, it will still make the poem work and give the reader something to relate to).

Don't forget to leave some comments on other poems.

AJ.
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One, Two - by Jetv42 - 06-25-2013, 01:40 PM
RE: One, Two - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-25-2013, 03:40 PM
RE: One, Two - by cidermaid - 06-25-2013, 04:05 PM
RE: One, Two - by allykat727 - 06-29-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: One, Two - by konstantin27 - 06-29-2013, 05:32 PM
RE: One, Two - by Jetv42 - 06-30-2013, 11:19 AM
RE: One, Two - by billy - 06-30-2013, 11:40 AM



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