One, Two

[R.C. KITCHENS]

One... two...
an echo guides me
As I chase the night
hearing music
I can't feel.

One... two...
one then two again,
Chasing,
I can't feel
Hearing,
I cant see.

One... two...
Into the night,
a shadow takes me
Where?
I can't see.

One... two...
and now three.
A beat changed,
A light, I can see.

Its proper etiquette to give critique before posting your poetry.
Unfortunately your poem lacks any visual coherency. Plain and simple, I just don't get what your trying to convey. If you take some time to read some poetry, you will see that it conveys some meaning in it that conveys an explanation. Your poem donest do this for me. Read some poetry and try to fix it up, you can still use your concept, just add some imagery and depth to it so it doesnt read as hollow words.