06-24-2013, 09:45 AM
This was a nice read. I liked the alliteration in this. Made it have a nice flow. Favorite line was probably this one.
"Knowing that I clipped my wings and wishing that I'd flown"
Yeah man, I could tell you were feeling this. However,I think it could've used a little more emotion for the reader. Still a pretty dope poem. Keep at it.
"Knowing that I clipped my wings and wishing that I'd flown"
Yeah man, I could tell you were feeling this. However,I think it could've used a little more emotion for the reader. Still a pretty dope poem. Keep at it.