06-24-2013, 09:18 AM
i can oly leave the same feedback here 
i think this is excellent.
everything about it.
the stressed start of most of the lines works really well
i'm not sure what the form is called but its a solid example
it's image rich and i'm struggling to express how much i like it. for me this is the best poem of yours i've read to date.
i think this is excellent.
everything about it.
the stressed start of most of the lines works really well
i'm not sure what the form is called but its a solid example
it's image rich and i'm struggling to express how much i like it. for me this is the best poem of yours i've read to date.