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06-24-2013, 06:17 AM

(06-24-2013, 05:12 AM)milo Wrote:
(06-24-2013, 05:10 AM)tectak Wrote:
(06-24-2013, 05:03 AM)milo Wrote: I see it was written in 1992, when every poem had a "sigh" and that was ok, when "thin air" could survive in poems that weren't parodies - Kurt Cobain was a rock hero for god's sake!!

"so lightly", "so thin" - meh

"to bow to music" is one to too many (being 2 but of course preceded by into)

"I rise on softly wafting wings"? this is Jeffrey Osbourne not pearl Jam!

I like your newer stuff better but you wouldn't want to read anything I wrote in '92, that much is certain!
Shit milo, I was in love...have you no soul?

Hey, I remember '92, I was in love then too!!

Holy shit! You weren't the scouse lass with the pubic wig that I married then found she meant genital herpes?

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Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 06-20-2013, 08:23 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by svanhoeven - 06-20-2013, 10:04 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-20-2013, 10:20 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 01:15 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-22-2013, 05:09 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 06:26 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-22-2013, 01:59 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-22-2013, 03:59 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by billy - 06-22-2013, 05:12 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-23-2013, 08:24 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-23-2013, 12:04 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-23-2013, 05:11 PM

RE: Play the violin again - by Brownlie - 06-24-2013, 12:36 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 01:59 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 05:03 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 05:10 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 05:12 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by tectak - 06-24-2013, 06:17 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by milo - 06-24-2013, 06:28 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by Keith - 06-24-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: Play the violin again - by serge gurkski - 06-25-2013, 11:41 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 06-29-2013, 06:57 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Brownlie - 06-30-2013, 06:00 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 07:22 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 06-30-2013, 05:02 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 06-30-2013, 07:42 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 06-30-2013, 05:31 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 06-30-2013, 06:32 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 06-30-2013, 06:46 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 07:10 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 06-30-2013, 07:15 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 06-30-2013, 07:48 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Leanne - 06-30-2013, 07:18 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by R.C. KITCHENS - 07-01-2013, 05:28 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 07-01-2013, 09:46 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Heartafire - 07-01-2013, 10:51 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 07-02-2013, 12:32 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Heartafire - 07-05-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 07-02-2013, 12:18 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by serge gurkski - 07-02-2013, 12:49 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by DeviousKid45 - 07-02-2013, 01:10 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 07-02-2013, 02:35 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by Brownlie - 07-06-2013, 01:30 AM

RE: Play the violin again edit 2. leanne,serge.edit 1 milo,svan,rc,billy, serge et al - by tectak - 07-06-2013, 01:36 AM

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