She Is Pregnant

[billy]

Thanks everybody. I will try and restructure it. I appreciate all the serious analysis. I have been missing this kind of criticism elsewhere. Let me work on it, in the meanwhile, I will submit my other poems and I look forward to hear your opinion on those.

all that's been said has been said. that you take it as you did, bodes well for your poetry

now, make sure you give feedback elsewhere ;j;