06-21-2013, 02:32 AM
Love this!
It flows so smoothly and the language really creates that feeling of slipping - like the words slip through our hands just as the sand.
I especially love the last two lines
It flows so smoothly and the language really creates that feeling of slipping - like the words slip through our hands just as the sand.
Quote:I'm curious as to why you chose to not use any punctuation and capitalize every line. I thought that style gave the poem a "slippery" feelTotally agree with that!
I especially love the last two lines
Quote: Until at last I understandSo beautiful...
The beauty of the slipping sand