06-20-2013, 03:40 PM
I like how you give the Earth human qualities and your strong use of metaphor and simile to convey these same feelings. The mood of humans match the moods of the Earth. Good Poem.
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"This is our world as we know it"
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"This is our world as we know it" - by ellz483 - 06-12-2013, 01:39 AM
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RE: "This is our world as we know it" - by Bunx - 06-12-2013, 06:29 AM
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RE: "This is our world as we know it" - by billy - 06-12-2013, 10:39 AM
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RE: "This is our world as we know it" - by masdor79 - 06-20-2013, 03:40 PM
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