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06-18-2013, 09:03 PM

(06-18-2013, 04:02 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:
(06-18-2013, 07:24 AM)milo Wrote: what is going on with these line breaks?
End of line denotes a slight pause and/or end of phrase.
Blank line indicates a longer pause and/or end of stanza.
My other poems are (mostly) like this as well. I don't enjoy
cutting thoughts (or delivery) in pieces just to make the lines
even. Though, oddly enough, I do regular old comments this
way. Hmmm...

when is a question not a question?

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< not with yellow flowers > - by rayheinrich - 06-18-2013, 06:55 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by milo - 06-18-2013, 07:24 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by rayheinrich - 06-18-2013, 04:02 PM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by milo - 06-18-2013, 09:03 PM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by rayheinrich - 06-19-2013, 06:48 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by Brownlie - 06-19-2013, 07:35 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by milo - 06-19-2013, 07:39 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by billy - 06-18-2013, 12:32 PM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by Bunx - 06-18-2013, 11:21 PM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by Brownlie - 06-19-2013, 04:10 AM

RE: < not with yellow flowers > - by Bunx - 06-19-2013, 04:59 AM

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