06-18-2013, 12:28 PM
the edit makes the poem better (stronger)
the voice is excellent. the intonation as milo said could be more in keeping with the mood of the time. but that said, you have a clear voice and you didn't cock up the read
i agree that walmart and india have little in common with the 80's in the uk. and i doubt india will ever come as close to socialism as scargill's boys did. the read definitely capture a moment in time i lived through. admittedly i was on the side of the minors and teachers and industry, but you get your thoughts across. the kids at the funeral will never make the sacrifice those in industrial 80's had to and no pm will ever be as strong as maggie was.
if you do any more vocal poetry, please put it in miscellaneous
i enjoyed it and i'll listen to it again.
the voice is excellent. the intonation as milo said could be more in keeping with the mood of the time. but that said, you have a clear voice and you didn't cock up the read
i agree that walmart and india have little in common with the 80's in the uk. and i doubt india will ever come as close to socialism as scargill's boys did. the read definitely capture a moment in time i lived through. admittedly i was on the side of the minors and teachers and industry, but you get your thoughts across. the kids at the funeral will never make the sacrifice those in industrial 80's had to and no pm will ever be as strong as maggie was.
if you do any more vocal poetry, please put it in miscellaneous
i enjoyed it and i'll listen to it again.