06-18-2013, 07:28 AM
Well, you know I hate rhetoric, so I have refrained from commenting on the poem itself. That being said, there is enough interesting wording to justify it as a worthy read (I won't go into the this's and the thats as, like I said, I am not good with rhetoric).
The reading.
I found you had an excellent pace and breath control and very good pronunciation. I would have preferred your intonation to match the passion of the subject matter in this particular case (certainly not in all a cases) but I would have liked to hear some righteous indignation come through, more anger, maybe a little snottiness. Just me. Overall, enjoyed.
The reading.
I found you had an excellent pace and breath control and very good pronunciation. I would have preferred your intonation to match the passion of the subject matter in this particular case (certainly not in all a cases) but I would have liked to hear some righteous indignation come through, more anger, maybe a little snottiness. Just me. Overall, enjoyed.