06-18-2013, 02:45 AM
(06-18-2013, 12:59 AM)remotemethod Wrote: Thanks everybody. I will try and restructure it. I appreciate all the serious analysis. I have been missing this kind of criticism elsewhere. Let me work on it, in the meanwhile, I will submit my other poems and I look forward to hear your opinion on those.Hy remote,
Good egg. You will be well received, I am sure.
Do NOT stop writing!
Best,
tectak

