She Is Pregnant
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(06-18-2013, 12:59 AM)remotemethod Wrote:  Thanks everybody. I will try and restructure it. I appreciate all the serious analysis. I have been missing this kind of criticism elsewhere. Let me work on it, in the meanwhile, I will submit my other poems and I look forward to hear your opinion on those.
Hy remote,
Good egg. You will be well received, I am sure.
Do NOT stop writing!
Best,
tectak
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Messages In This Thread
She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 09:14 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by milo - 06-17-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by milo - 06-17-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by wystan1000 - 06-17-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-17-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by tectak - 06-17-2013, 04:57 PM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-18-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by tectak - 06-18-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by billy - 06-21-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by wystan1000 - 06-18-2013, 01:19 AM



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