She Is Pregnant
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(06-17-2013, 09:14 AM)remotemethod Wrote:  The fear of impregnation
Anticipation of hue and cry
The feeblness of her existence
The fear of outcry

Absent her will to confront
The unpreparedness
Of her demeanour
Oh! So unprecedented

Shovel loads of raven infatuation
Blazing ambers
All but defenseless
Equipped with a daring ploy
To seed her with ecstasy
Bundled up
With guilty heathen pleasures

There

She is pregnant
Pregnant with joy
I didn't get the "Joy" of being pregnant from this. I believe this is a rough draft to build from, where you can take this and build it with imagery to make it show or express the feeling of being pregnant. It was very difficult to get anything from it with your word choices and lack of solid images. I agree with milo about trying some warm-ups or novice forum first.
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Messages In This Thread
She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 09:14 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by milo - 06-17-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by milo - 06-17-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-17-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by wystan1000 - 06-17-2013, 04:24 PM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by R.C. KITCHENS - 06-17-2013, 11:24 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by tectak - 06-17-2013, 04:57 PM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by remotemethod - 06-18-2013, 12:59 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by tectak - 06-18-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by billy - 06-21-2013, 08:21 AM
RE: She Is Pregnant - by wystan1000 - 06-18-2013, 01:19 AM



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