06-15-2013, 09:16 AM
(06-15-2013, 08:39 AM)billy Wrote: thanks to all for the feedback. will do an edit sometime this weekI wanted to offer something constructive, I read it around 12 or 13 times now. There were a couple places where the diction or rhythm threw me but those have all been covered already so instead I will just say:
i will change ash can to trash can. i'll ponder the rest
oh yeash, (i sound like connery's bond) it was meant to be two thousand
Enjoyed the read.
Nice Job!
Thanks for posting.



