06-13-2013, 04:45 PM
I actually loved the line "I like the way you smile when you read" for a number of reasons.
1. It says a /ton/ without using a lot of words.
2. It is perfect ip
3. I bet I could turn it into a sonnet.
A lot of the rest felt too flakey and loose for my taste but there were a number of other bright spots as well so I bet if you used some spray starch and spent a couple hours at the ironing boards you could straighten it out.
1. It says a /ton/ without using a lot of words.
2. It is perfect ip
3. I bet I could turn it into a sonnet.
A lot of the rest felt too flakey and loose for my taste but there were a number of other bright spots as well so I bet if you used some spray starch and spent a couple hours at the ironing boards you could straighten it out.